In some countries, more and more adults are living with their parents after graduating from college, university, or even after finding a job. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?
It is expected of young adults to be flew out the nest after awarding graduated certificate. In many parts of the world, however, this does not seem to be the common situation because of an increasing adults and their parents make a decisions living under the roof together. In my perspective, the phenomenon brings wealth of advantages than drawbacks.
On the one hand, staying with parents allows adults find it easier to approach to multifaceted adulthood life. To go on details, sharing accommodation with parents is deemed as economical expenses. Fresh students and novice workers who do not have permanent jobs or stable income, actually they cannot afford for prohibitively expensive expenditures such as water, electricity bills, and other living costs. All of which make absolutely them exhaust if they move out on their own. However, parents have the adequate capacity to save coming-of-age adolescents the trouble of paying entirely aforementioned living costs. In other words, they also need to spend an amount of money if they want to visit their own parents on occasions. Another benefit of living under the roof with parents is that virtual members of a family can be able to encourage and support precisely together in tough times. Furthermore, in the events, when one of members in a family falls in, especially aging-parents or grandparents, other ones have a valuable chance to take care for the formers.
In spite of such advantages, there are also inevitable drawbacks that staying with parents for a long span might pose. In some countries all over the world, many parents tend to employ strictly hierarchical rules to grow and excessively control their offspring so that they may force their children on implementing whatever they order. As a results, the practice brings up new generations who cannot know measures how to make a decision and be able self-reliant in unexpected situations due to interfering seriously of their parents. In modern times, a person’s chances to succeed can achieve by only a precise decision in an urgent period so if that person does not have the opportunities to make uninfluenced decisions, they would failure in their own career and life.
In conclusion, although there are some adverse impacts on adults who live in a nuclear family consisting of parents and offspring, the practice brings wealth of advantages for adults.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a result' or simply 'results'?
Suggestion: a result; results
...on implementing whatever they order. As a results, the practice brings up new generations...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, furthermore, however, if, may, so, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in other words, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 65.0 41.998997996 155% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2000.0 1615.20841683 124% => OK
No of words: 388.0 315.596192385 123% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15463917526 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43821085614 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91416330225 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 221.0 176.041082164 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569587628866 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 628.2 506.74238477 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.2105113938 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.0 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.25 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.1875 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211363218085 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0673585490372 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0386933379212 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131558669235 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0306087713359 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.3 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 78.4519038076 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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