The maps below show the changes in the art gallery ground floor in 2005 and present day

Essay topics:

The maps below show the changes in the art gallery ground floor in 2005 and present day.

The diagram depicts modifications to the layout of the ground floor of an unspecified art exhibition in the year of 2005 and at present.
Overall, a number of extensive renovations took places all over the site with various facilities being relocated, replaced and added.
Looking at the pictures in more detail, the stair up to the entrance was divided into two parts including steps on the right and a ramp for people using wheelchairs on the left. The reception desk being adjacent to the gallery office was converted into the round one lying in the central area. Besides, a lift was added to serve more effectively relocated between the former stair and exhibition room 3. Moreover, the exhibition room 4 was cleared, giving place for children site focusing on interactive activities and a room for temporary exhibitions.
One note-worthy point is that, the cafe and shop was transformed into a new gallery shop with 3 winding machines set up in the place of the old gallery in addition. Finally, the three exhibition room were on the right hand side has remained unchanged.

Votes
Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 134, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...es being relocated, replaced and added. Looking at the pictures in more detail, ...
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Line 4, column 253, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...right hand side has remained unchanged.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, finally, if, look, moreover, in addition

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 902.0 965.302439024 93% => OK
No of words: 182.0 196.424390244 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95604395604 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67297393991 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77804719004 2.65546596893 105% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 106.607317073 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.615384615385 0.547539520022 112% => OK
syllable_count: 281.7 283.868780488 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.9240040109 43.030603864 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.75 112.824112599 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.75 22.9334400587 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.125 5.23603664747 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0987930486522 0.215688989381 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.045178774919 0.103423049105 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0826644492717 0.0843802449381 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0811428320894 0.15604864568 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.102359759337 0.0819641961636 125% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.2329268293 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 61.2550243902 94% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 11.4140731707 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.06136585366 111% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 40.7170731707 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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