Many people argue that smoking should be banned due to its harmful effects on human health.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
it is often argued that smoking should be prohibited because of the adverse effect on people health. this essay agrees with the idea that cigarette should be forbidden. The essay will first show that people can be negatively affected by cigarettes, and then it will demonstrate why it is necessary to impose a ban on smoking.
Firstly, it is true that using cigarettes must not be allowed due to their adverse effect for people health. this is because cigarettes contain variety of toxic chemicals, including nicotine, which is able to damage people’s lung. As a result, people may suffer from various types of respiratory diseases, even fatal diseases like lung cancer, if they smoke as their daily routine. For example, in Vietnam, smoking is the reason for more than 40000 deaths every year, and most of these cases are lung cancer.
Secondly, that is necessary for people to place a forbiddance on smoking in order to alleviate the problems in terms of human health. The reason is that if cigarettes users stop smoking, they risk of suffering from hazardous ailments relating to their respiratory system can be reduced significantly. Moreover, people who do not smoke actively are also less likely to sniff harmful gases from cigarettes, because passive smokers can face with greater risks than active smokers, especially pregnant women, children and old people. Consequently, there are the reasons why many countries have put a ban on smoking, particularly in public places like schools and hospitals, and anyone who violates can be heavily fined.
In conclusion, smoking is able to cause negative impacts for human health, so forbidding smoking is the action that should be implemented as soon as possible.P
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, firstly, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, for example, in conclusion, as a result, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1449.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.175 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68268969126 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.596428571429 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 451.8 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.4271464077 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.75 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3333333333 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.1666666667 7.06120827912 158% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.303416016034 0.244688304435 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11820506517 0.084324248473 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0809722515959 0.0667982634062 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.188514000667 0.151304729494 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0639772998445 0.056905535591 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.4 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.