Many people believe that it is easier to have a healthy lifestyle in the countryside. Other believe that there are health benefits of living in cities. Discuss both views and give your opinions.
People's opinions differ as to whether it is easier to have a healthy way of life in rural areas or living in urban areas can bring benefits to our health. This essay will discuss both sides of the argument in detail and elaborate on why I believe the former one is stronger.
There are two primary reasons why many individuals argue that having a healthy lifestyle in the countryside is more simple. To begin with, since the bustling and hustling in the city has been increasing nowadays, people tend not to focus much on their health and body. Therefore, living in a peaceful place where no one judging them and they will hardly see those beautiful figures that they usually saw on signboards to compare them to, they can live a happy and active life. To the elderly, for example, while they were young, they always wanted to go to big cities because they think it is the best way to have more opportunities for getting a well-paid job. But when they are so used to it, they started to feel uncomfortable and stifling with the city's atmosphere. Furthermore, in urban areas where lots of individuals gather there to make their dream come true, they likely to have a competitive spirit, that's why everyone will try to be perfect to be able to take their chances. This is the easiest way to make people more toxic and unhealthy.
On the other hand, I believe that citizen's health can be beneficial from a mixed variety of facilities that cities can offer. For example, if they feel a bit off, they can go to the nearest hospital for a check-up while in the countryside, it is sometimes hard to the hospital due to the distance. Another reason is that there are plenty of gym rooms with many different types of equipment for people to work out in order to get themselves moving and improve their health. Because regular exercise is essential in maintaining a strong, fit body. Moreover, therapy in urban areas is more common so that residents can go to see some therapists for mind care services.
In conclusion, although both views certainly have some validity, it seems to me that it is better to stay in the countryside to have a healthy lifestyle in the long run.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, while, as to, for example, in conclusion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 60.0 41.998997996 143% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1781.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 387.0 315.596192385 123% => OK
Chars per words: 4.60206718346 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43534841618 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53239993474 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.542635658915 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 576.9 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 43.1723162326 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.733333333 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.8 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.46666666667 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.253589707905 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0814630189481 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0759607968144 0.0667982634062 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175797723093 0.151304729494 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0771316134257 0.056905535591 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.7 12.4159519038 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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