Some people think that newspapers are the best way to learn news. However, others believe that they can learn news better through other media. Discuss both views and give your opinion?
Some individuals believe that reading newspapers is the greatest method to keep up with current events. Others, however, think that other forms of media can help them learn more about the news. This essay will discuss both sides of the argument in detail and provide evidence as to why I am more inclined towards the latter.
On one hand, there are good grounds for arguing that newspapers still hold the most popular position among newsreaders even though we are living in a digital world. Firstly, since newspapers have existed long before the introduction of the internet, most senior citizens have developed a habit of reading a newspaper every day, and they do not want to change this habit. Secondly, newspapers are considered a more reliable source of information compared to other sources nowadays. This is because newspapers are usually written by professional journalists, and they also have to go through different stages before publishing such as editing, checking.
On the other hand, the Internet has become an increasingly viral news source these days due to the benefits it offers. The first thing that attracts people to reading news online is its easy access. Take Facebook, for example, people tend to scroll the feeds every day and when they follow a certain number of famous online newspapers like The New York Times or CNN, it will appear on their home page, and they will get the world's newest events by reading all the headlines. Furthermore, online news channels have brought a greater reading experience to readers, thanks to the constant advancement in technology, which has made it possible to upload videos and audio recordings online. To illustrate, TikTok is an app that allows content creators to make a short video about anything, for instance, NBC News always uploads videos about vaccines and coronavirus-related information every night at 7 o'clock on this online platform.
In conclusion, although both views certainly have some validity, it seems to me that it is better to use the Internet in order to keep ourselves updated about current affairs.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'worlds the newest'.
Suggestion: worlds the newest
... their home page, and they will get the worlds newest events by reading all the headlines. Fu...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: o'clock
...us-related information every night at 7 oclock on this online platform. In conclusio...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...lves updated about current affairs.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, second, secondly, so, still, as to, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1753.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 342.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12573099415 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30037696126 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69946391607 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 176.041082164 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.634502923977 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 542.7 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 58.8925407921 49.4020404114 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.846153846 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.3076923077 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.6923076923 7.06120827912 166% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.245118709034 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0827351153311 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0664854270055 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139566173923 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0657170287262 0.056905535591 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.77 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.13 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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