Many people believe that scientific research should be carried out and controlled by governments rather than private companies. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Some part of people argue that private companies should have to carry out and control on their own without permission from the government. Personally, I believe that this has both advantages and disadvantages and this essay will provide suitable reasons and examples.
There are some advantages to this argument. First of all, If private companies can do anything they want while do not worry about governments, they might gain huge profits with their individual ideas which can be permitted by the government. Moreover, in some strong nations such as America, Russia, and so on, governments have not controlled their stock markets which allow many private companies do their decisions by their own will. As a result, lots of individual business companies have a huge amount of money which creates a high opportunity to develop their company even further, while still help these nations' GDP increase rapidly because these companies can pay for employees higher.
On the other hand, Despite these good effects, private companies have not been controlled by governments still exist drawbacks. The most important reason is that if governments do not check the quality of private companies, these companies might avoid paying taxes or even taking bribes. Consequently, This decline nation's economy and their reputation on the global. In addition, food-product companies might fake their ingredient by adding more toxic food chemicals due to their greed. This causes negative impacts on people's health unless local governments are not checking and punishing them with heavy penalties.
In conclusion, if the government lets private companies free to do their mind without having an eye on them, which is just like a double-edged blade, the more benefits it brings the more danger it has to the nation's development.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 209, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'nations'' or 'nation's'?
Suggestion: nations'; nation's
...it brings the more danger it has to the nations development.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, if, moreover, so, still, while, as to, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1526.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31707317073 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73308914066 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.602787456446 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 459.9 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.2014580764 49.4020404114 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.166666667 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9166666667 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.75 7.06120827912 166% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213251604963 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0809491788525 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0638912968892 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138102775058 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0339136878134 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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