Many people believe that social networking gives a negative impact on individual and society
Since the advent of social media, the average screen time per person has increased up to 3 times. It is often argued that social networking websites have detrimental effects on our daily lives such as health problems, lack of time management, lack of privacy, and many more. While on the contrary, for some it is their main source of income. In my opinion, it majorly primarily depends on person to person, as long as someone knows how to handle hatred and curb on using the social platforms curb their usage of whenever necessary.
On one hand, social media addiction is like binge eating, it has long-term effects on both mental and physical health. The ones who take hate comments seriously are primarily affected by psychological distress such as depression and anxiety. Consequently, they are not able to concentrate on their job or education, hence their productivity and energy levels decrease exponentially. A study was conducted by the New York times which has predicted that folks who spend almost 1/8th of their time on social media have posture and obesity complications. It is shaping our next generation, as most of the teenagers day in and day out consume the toxic content available online, which might give repercussions to the entire world. Last but not the least, ample amounts of people are losing their jobs just because they have posted some bad comments on any professional networking platform.
On the other hand, we are more connected to the world. Even though we are physically not present, but we can connect with our family and friends at any given time. Secondly, many people earn from social media by writing bogs, putting videos on the topic that they are passionate about, companies give advertisement to enhance their product sales. Lastly, altogether we can fight for social justice and environmental issues.
To recapitulate, considering the aforementioned points, the usage of social is increasing at such a rapid pace that it is inevitable, but if we regulate our time and not watch toxic content we can overcome most of the disadvantages.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, hence, if, lastly, second, secondly, so, while, such as, in my opinion, on the contrary, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1743.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 345.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05217391304 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3097767484 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80783253515 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594202898551 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 556.2 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.5145320981 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.2 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.33333333333 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.134648247463 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0419377462864 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0441989326548 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0790565950192 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0290677952651 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.31 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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