Many people believe that social networking sites such as facebook have had a huge negative impact on both individuals and society.
To what extent do you agree?
Obviously, everyone should walk with current trend so that they have to learn a little about present technology though, a group of believers state that they are having a drastic impact of social apps. But, certain people and i partially disagree because, for having a stronger relationship among countries, it is necessary to use social media and it is the only way to get sense of well-being.
Using a source of media is needed for individuals for their betterment and with the help of it, they can get to know about foreign people. Additionally, he can share his culture easily and indirectly, they start the international trade. As an example, Twitter, it is one of the well known app which have more than thousands followers globally. Thus,it make the national bound more stronger.
Contrastingly , anyone can make fake identity on social media which usually seen by every follower and it directly affect their mentality. Moreover, they are mislead from their track and easily take part in any criminal activity. As an example, Facebook, by the survey, there are 2% of fake users who operating at international level and they are mostly choosing the young group. In result , more and more people can take part in unsocial activity so that their future may compromised and it also affect the national relationships.
On concluding remark, for bright friendship among countries, people should use social media for their betterment but, if they found an interruption then they should reduce their usage of facebook.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, moreover, so, then, thus, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1268.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 250.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.072 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7501689176 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 396.0 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.5834362078 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.272727273 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7272727273 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.54545454545 7.06120827912 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0936629006327 0.244688304435 38% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0342695007217 0.084324248473 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0330349218499 0.0667982634062 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.063526050932 0.151304729494 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0402918605592 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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