It is argued that students should take on the burden of paying their university tuition fees in the light of the fact that this would contribute to some advantages to themselves in comparison with the society. This essay agrees with the idea completely and will discuss how it would affect learning skill, securing a career and also would give a hand to societies.
On the one hand, paying the tuition fees by students would not only urge them to get a job in order to cover their economic problem, but also would lead to acquisition of a pursuit. It is often said that graduates always are complaining about the unemployment nowadays. So seeking a work that is associated with their own area of study would have multitude privilege both for their current situation and their future as well. For example, personally, I have not faced with problem of finding a job as a civil engineer since I commence doing my refurbishment project while I was a University student. Subsequently, when I graduates I just did a little fine-tuning and I move into more serious project.
On the other hand, Educational segment always challenge with hardship of provision of facilities or paying off their staff salaries. In consequence, it would be wise if students pay tuition fees with respect to resolution of this issue. As long as their colleges would access to adequate economic resources, facilitating universities appropriately bring about soaring the education quality by fulfilled professors. As a transparent instance, international campus of Tehran University is a thoroughly self-funded college that students pay their tuition fees routinely. Therefore, this fact caused having sophisticated visual and laboratory instrument such as super-computers, high quality video-projections and smart white-boards that could not be seen in state Universities.
To sum up, student should unify their efforts to support universities for helping them to meet their ideal condition. Not only would it bring upsides to students, but it would also result in benefits to society. Besides, it could somehow shows the right way of securing a career and not confronting with unemployment difficulties.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 622, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[1]
Message: The pronoun 'I' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'graduate'
Suggestion: graduate
...niversity student. Subsequently, when I graduates I just did a little fine-tuning and I m...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 239, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'could' requires the base form of the verb: 'show'
Suggestion: show
...s to society. Besides, it could somehow shows the right way of securing a career and ...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, so, therefore, well, while, for example, such as, to sum up, with respect to, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1836.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 348.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27586206897 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31911543099 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12283218507 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.568965517241 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 567.9 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.874498925 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.4 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.93333333333 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.242665141994 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.082933446116 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0671813479408 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152949864235 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0114173677313 0.056905535591 20% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.64 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.41 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.78957915832 194% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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