Many people now undertake extreme activities; from hang-gliding to mountain climbing. Why do people risk their lives in this way, and do you think is a good trend?
Give reasons for your answer, and include any relevant examples from your own Knowledge or experience.
You should write at least 250 words.
Sport is an integral part of human’s life. But some people love to do extreme activities such as Para-gliding, mountain hiking, mountain biking and diving in the deep sea. These are extremely dangerous things to do, so I do not think so people should take these kinds of risks.
Firstly, People are tired of having a hectic life so that’s why they participate in adventurous games for relaxation. Secondly, these days, youth is obsessed to do something different so they choose those sports which involve risks. Thirdly, social media is also promoting these types of breathtaking amusement. For example, As we can see on social media, many young people taking pictures from heights and sometimes we heard the news that people lost their lives because of these risks.
Adventures games are so popular so it is hard to stop people to play. But there should be some limitations such as age must be fixed to do risky activities. People should take fitness medical test before indulging in hazardous games. For example, for sky diving people must have a certificate related to heart check-up because many people lost their lives while sky –diving. The government should make some laws regarding these types of extreme activities.
At last, people should follow rules and regulations regarding life risky games because they should not lose their valuable lives during these kinds of risks.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 251, Rule ID: SKY_DIVING[1]
Message: Did you mean 'skydiving'?
Suggestion: skydiving
...ng in hazardous games. For example, for sky diving people must have a certificate related ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, regarding, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, while, for example, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1172.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 229.0 315.596192385 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11790393013 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89008302616 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57924499022 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.593886462882 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 365.4 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.1850928802 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.1538461538 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6153846154 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.23076923077 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219962552965 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0781331674438 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0549500821009 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140546475252 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0449505005781 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.12 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 78.4519038076 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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