Extreme sports had seen more popularity over the years.In my opinion,I think people should fully enjoying their lives even though some activities could be dangerous and it could be a good trend if safety measures are implemented.
Activities like rock climbing,skydiving or any other form of sports which requires dangerous stunts are called extreme sports.As people become bored with traditional sports,they wanted some kind of task that are more challenging and excited.These kind of sports provided them just king of experiences.The body release some kind of hormones called adrenaline that are released when people become more excited or in some cases are scared in various tough situation.This hormone make our body more awake and hearts pumping out more blood to help us cope with these tense circumstances.They usually try these activities during the weekend after finishing their mundane work or routines.
While these activities are fun and challenge our skills to a great extent,they could also potentially harms the player which could lead to their untimely death.Form what I see, there are some solutions to this problems.First,we must ensure that our equipment met to the standard are not broken or damaged.Second,they should have some training and considerate amount of experience.Also,first timers should be doing some research regarding which location is newbie-friendly.Lastly,there should be supervisors around the proximity to ensure the safety of the players.
In conclusion,more guidelines and regulations could be added to ensure that people would have fun with the felling of adrenaline rushing out of their body, while also aware of their safety.I think that these extreme activities is a great trend with many benefits to our body functioning and activeness which should gaining more attention and popularity.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, lastly, regarding, second, so, while, i think, in conclusion, kind of, in my opinion, in some cases, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1564.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.58571428571 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.49258690161 2.80592935109 124% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.578571428571 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 486.0 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 70.0 20.2975951904 345% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 176.687577379 49.4020404114 358% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 391.0 106.682146367 367% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 70.0 20.7667163134 337% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 33.75 7.06120827912 478% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 24.0 5.01903807615 478% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.121356642463 0.244688304435 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0870642326716 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0374535821575 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0870642326716 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0374535821575 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 39.9 13.0946893788 305% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -8.03 50.2224549098 -16% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 18.2 7.44779559118 244% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 31.8 11.3001002004 281% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 16.33 12.4159519038 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.28 8.58950901804 131% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 30.5 9.78957915832 312% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 30.0 10.1190380762 296% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 31.0 10.7795591182 288% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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