Many people prefer to watch foreign films rather than locally produced films.
Why could this be? Should governments give more financial support to local film industries?
It is true that the behaviour of many people are more likely to watch exotic films than domestically produced films in recent years. There are a variety of possible reasons for this, but steps can definitely be taken to tackle the problem by governments.
The reason why foreign films have attracted most watchers is that big budget, famous actors and directors and so on. To be specifically, those films with big budget have always brought top-grossing films, which means that film makers could apply more technology like three-dimentions and display marvelous special effects for viewers. in addition, foreign movies are often acted by famous stars so that some of fans are might support their idols who attend movies. Moreover, it is necessary that excellent directors who received professional education and accumulated abundant experiences and also produced some high-quality films that people need and pursued.
Compared to exotic films, governments could provide funds for domestically produced films and talented film makers. Firstly, the film industry is a highly profitable business, and many top-grossing films have considerable profits, if local films populated around the world. Secondly, those talented film makers need the investment to produce high-quality films which can compete with foreign movies. For instance, some local movies which record customs as well as traditional way of life and without government funds, it is difficult to succeed.
In conclusion, it must be extremely difficult for people to choose which films to watch, but I would like to see more and more pubic would like to support domestically produced films.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, as well as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1397.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.43579766537 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81319458998 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.575875486381 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 423.9 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.3964416375 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.0 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3636363636 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.0909090909 7.06120827912 171% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.448711500353 0.244688304435 183% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.173044918292 0.084324248473 205% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0982385543745 0.0667982634062 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.274036801103 0.151304729494 181% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0653382597126 0.056905535591 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.57 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.2 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.