Many people say that the only way to guarantee a good job is to complete a course of university education. Others claim that it is better to start work after school and gain experience in the world of work.
Which point of view do you agree with?
Since a collosal upsurge in inflation made it difficult for people to earn their livelihood, it becomes necessary for them to secure a steady job. A part of crowd accord that, if someone desires to secure a well-paid job, he or she has to complete higher education. However others believe that, instead of seeking degrees one should focus on gaining experience. I will support the views of the former group, as i believe, without education it would be trouble-some for people to thrive their career.
It can be seen, that nowadays every employer advertise about the vacancy for a job with a handsome salary along with keeping some eligibility criteria, in which qualification is always the priority. Highly paid jobs in every organisation demands the credentials in a particular specialization. For instance, in India one of the most demanding and secured job is of nurses in government hospitals, and for that one need to complete his or her bachelor degree in nursing. Hence, the people even after having years of experience can not apply for this job, if they did not completed their university education.
In addition to this, the cut throat compitition made it arduous for people to secure lucerative spots in an organization, and therefore they do not only have to get higher qualification but also secure good grades. To illustrate, to become an IPS officer in India one need to get good grades in placement test along with the credentials, in contrast People, who fails to get college degrees hardly manage to secure a lower level of jobs in crime branch. Needless to say, without education one can not even think about getting a steady and highly paid job.
In summary, I believe that education is the key for not only to earn livelihood but also to get a secure occupation.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
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Message: The verb 'did' requires the base form of the verb: 'complete'
Suggestion: complete
...not apply for this job, if they did not completed their university education. In addit...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, so, therefore, well, as to, for instance, in addition, in contrast, in summary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.3376753507 228% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1489.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89802631579 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80326276251 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5625 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 488.7 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 11.0 4.76152304609 231% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 46.3545365154 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.083333333 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3333333333 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.08333333333 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160911672596 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0632740215946 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0288169403282 0.0667982634062 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0963416341559 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0266324448555 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.