Many people send their children abroad to study.
Discuss the advantages and disadvantages.
When do you think is the suitable age for children to be sent abroad.
Education is certain aspectly something which is often mentioned in today’s world. With desires to have all-rounded education, THE WAY OF sending children to study abroad is a top decision which is chosen by many parents and children themselves. Learning oversea offers students abundant advantages; however, unavoidable disadvantages still exist.
To begin with, studying in another country provides learners apparent bright sides. Most students choose developed countries to continue their course. It is thanks to that they may have opportunities to accumulate knowledge in the best way with modern equipment and up-to-date teaching methods. Besides, highly developed life with new lifestyle brings abroad students widespread relationships , CONNECTING and connects to people around the world. New culture will be obtained and selected carefully so they can improve themselves.
On the contrary, everything has its own two sides, paralleling with advantages, easily visible disadvantages still maintain. Living internationally with the different levels of currency drives learners living there to troubles by daily expensive expense in strange land. In addition, extraordinary life contains hidden dangerous temptations which students may be affected that leading to adverse consequences, especially to their life and their results at school.
In general, although there is no limit for the age to study oversea, parents and children should think over the questions: Do your children really have enough abilities to live a good life, by themselves, in a completely new environment? Not only the children but the whole family ALSO as well should be aware of this issue before kids are sent abroad hastily. Hence, to ensure students’ life and studies abroad, it goes without saying that over seventeen is the suitable age to step on a foreign land.
On the whole, no matter do people study in their countries or in another one, what they need the most is a comprehensive education that can support them to open the window to the world, contributing to their career and their own nations.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, hence, however, if, may, really, so, still, well, in addition, in general, on the contrary, on the whole, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1788.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 323.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.53560371517 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96510339355 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625386996904 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 546.3 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.1529297521 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.2 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5333333333 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.26666666667 7.06120827912 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235594924703 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.065586982467 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0722822546527 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121130938256 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0793895922127 0.056905535591 140% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.85 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.52 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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