many people think that cheap air travel should be encouraged because it gives ordinary people the freedom to travel further. however, others think that this leads to environmental problem, and so air travel should be more expensive in order to discourage people from having it. discuss both sides and give your opinion
A host of people affirm that cheap air flight is highly contentious whether it is advantageous for tourism especially ordinary people, others, on the contrary, the increasing number of flights are negatively impacting the environment and the price of plane tickets should be raised. In this essay, I will discuss both of these views.
On the one hand, there are two main reasons why cheap air travel has tremendously helped individuals who have a tight budget are at liberty to travel more. Firstly, in the past, only when people have an affluent life can they go overseas, however, nowadays, with the enhancement of aviation, there are more and more airlines. Due to that reason, many middle-class citizens now can afford a plane ticket to visit another region and broaden their cultural knowledge. Consequently, the tourism industry of the host country can be promoted. Nevertheless, while air travel is not the wildest dream, the norm has a tendency to go more. It not only will bring beneficial effects on the economy of the destination that the visitors arrive at but also the authorities will earn a huge profit from texas.
On the other hand, a myriad of people consider that the cheap and frequent air travel plays an important role in the environmental damages and hence they opine that these sorts of economic flyings should be prohibited. Their main concern is the number of airplanes flying every day to different destinations and the amount of emission they are eliminating to the environment. From the environmental point of view, a single flight emits a huge amount of Carbon dioxide which is the factor caused the greenhouse effect. No doubt the economy flights give some freedom and luxury to the passengers, but the negative impacts these cheap flights have been colossal.
As far as I am concerned, the government should not inhibit the cheap air services as it has already become part of global tourism, trade, and economy. However, should authorities allocate money on exploiting alternative energy, the CO2 emission from each flight will be released
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, firstly, hence, however, if, nevertheless, so, while, no doubt, on the contrary, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1734.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 343.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05539358601 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30351707066 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75249541184 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.571428571429 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 543.6 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.3962074146 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.857142857 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.28571428571 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.2793665006 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0847829694683 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0740215818824 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1581296349 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.021484890688 0.056905535591 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.15 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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