In the current world, although the development of civilization, one of most precious valves for humans is to be honest and to tell the truth. I personally advocate it is one of most important factors for you to be honest and not to lie to all your family or your peel to have a happy life, to raise a happy family and to maintain a harmony community.
To begin with, telling a truth is an essential method to build up a good reputation. There is an English saying that it will take 10 years to build a good reputation but only 10 second to break it. In western developed countries, honesty is one of most important requirements for professionals, such as doctors, police officers. Take a physician who is taking care of a patient with the diagnosis of an end-stage cancer as an example. It is necessary for the physician to tell the truth to the patient regarding the course of the disease. Although telling the truth to the patient will make him/her upset and depressed, it is one of right practices for the physician . Telling a truth is one of core values in our societies.
In addition, Telling truth will contribute the establishment of rapport among people in societies. Being honest will enhance the relationship among family members or among staff in companies. However, small amount of people may argue that it is acceptable to lie under certain situation because telling truth may cause a bad outcome. For example, a husband had an affair with one of his girl friends and lied to his wife. The husband did not tell the truth to his wife in order to maintain the relationship with his wife. However, it was unfair to the wife who may be hurt once she found the truth. Moreover, being honest always will be a good role model in communities, especially for the young generation.
All in all, I believe that tell a truth is one of essential factors for current societies. A healthy relationship is built up in terms of being honest to one another. It is a rule to be honest and not to lie to people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, moreover, regarding, second, so, for example, in addition, such as, to begin with, to tell the truth
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 41.998997996 140% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1657.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 362.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.5773480663 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36191444098 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7225186045 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.450276243094 0.561755894193 80% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 521.1 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.923818952 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.2105263158 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0526315789 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.47368421053 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0247939964893 0.244688304435 10% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.00847305739765 0.084324248473 10% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0198107413627 0.0667982634062 30% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0171240051592 0.151304729494 11% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0174811112981 0.056905535591 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 13.0946893788 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 50.2224549098 138% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 11.3001002004 73% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.28 12.4159519038 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.33 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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