MANY OF THE WORLD’S ARE CURRENTLY FACING A SERIOUS HOUSING SHORTAGE. WHAT ARE SOME OF THE REASONS FOR THIS SHORTAGE AND WHAT SOLUTIONS CAN YOU SUGGEST
A large number of cities in the world nowadays have to confront the rising problem of housing shortage for their citizens. This essay will discuss some of the main reasons and some practical solutions that I would recommend.
To begin with, I would argue that overpopulation and the migration of people who live in the rural areas to big cities are the two major reasons that trigger the serious shortage of housing. Since there are more promising job opportunities in cities, people tend to find well-paid jobs in big corporations that located in the metropolis. That lead to the huge demand of people for having a place to live in this urban area. Secondly the rate of birth now seems to uncontrollably rise with the report about one hundred newborn babies per minute in an average country. If there is no action taken by the authorities, the population will continuously rise and bring disadvantages in solving the issue.
Hence, there are two feasible solutions that can be taken into serious consideration. Firstly, authorities should promulgate an urgent population policy that a household family is only allowed to have 2 children. This strategy is now implemented in many countries like Vietnam and received positive effects within just 10 years. Secondly, urbanisation should also be produced. With this improvement, more companies, workshops and big corporations providing employment for people can be erected on a larger scale, not only in the central areas like the past. This leads to the increase of more urban areas that attract the attention of people and the decrease of over-populated areas.
In conclusion, as far as I observe, the shortage of housing results from two main causes, the overpopulation and the imigration, however, authorities can deal with it with the application of some new policies as I mentioned.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: Many; Numerous
A large number of cities in the world nowadays have to co...
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Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, hence, however, if, second, secondly, so, well, as to, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1546.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13621262458 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95175946916 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.571428571429 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 490.5 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.2774761923 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.428571429 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208998824056 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0659015387243 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0614669851705 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140712480134 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0720336327688 0.056905535591 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.14 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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