Military service should be compulsory in secondary school.
Few masses reckon that the nation service should be compulsory from the secondary school for every resident. There are various number of pros and construction which I discuss in following paragraph.
Taking one side of the argument, there are people who believe that military service is beneficial for students. while, they get huge knowledge about the social responsibility. Also, schools provide classes like NCC. Where, student take skills how they protect the national whenever accur any unethical activity. For illustration, one survey is conduct which persons observed NCC classes make student confident and they build there skills.
On the flip side, there are antogonists to this assertion who believe that nation service should gives bad impact on students. Moreover, few learners missed their classes for taking NCC classes. It was observed students do not take concentration on their education. As well as, Few learners can misuse that tries in the life which is dangerous for them.
Nevertheless, weighing both the options, I believe that there is no single conclusion still, they are beneficial because student learn new tricks which is helpful for their life. However, it is also a way of lack of education.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: While
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Suggestion:
...schools provide classes like NCC. Where, student take skills how they protect the...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, second, so, still, well, while, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 13.0 41.998997996 31% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1033.0 1615.20841683 64% => OK
No of words: 194.0 315.596192385 61% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32474226804 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73207559907 4.20363070211 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67617130777 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 176.041082164 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.654639175258 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 313.2 506.74238477 62% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.4628367182 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.4615384615 106.682146367 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.9230769231 20.7667163134 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.53846153846 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176585760241 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0598836360767 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.122836867173 0.0667982634062 184% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119904146089 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.133777967692 0.056905535591 235% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.98 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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