mobile telephones have brought many benefits, but they have also had negative effects.
do the advantages of having mobile phone outweigh the disadvantages?
Many advantages that phone bring. However, had a slightly negative impacts. According to me, that nowadays mobile telephones have a good advantages and also disadvantages.
The advantages of mobile phone is make people more easier to communicate with many people in other place. At the sam time, phone make the users easier to do research to find any information. Also, can be used for online business, are more simple for people to shop without going to the store and make a job opportunities for new youngster. Then , in mobile telephone have a GPS technology more easy for the user to find nay location during travelling. Last, phone also can be our reminder and alarms for make people on time and remind all the schedules and meeting.
The disadvantages using phone too much are can make eyes problems and not good for our health. Currently many kids now using phone that make a bad impact to them. So, they are more lazy to study and make them spending more time to use phone and playing games. And, other reason is loss of human life there are many people using mobile telephone while driving which can cause accidents. Last, make a distance from family, friends and relatives that near with us at the same environment. Sometimes we are too busy with our phone then forget about our time and every time we use it we keep distance from people that actually near us.
In conclusion, that mobile phone bring a advantages and also disadvantages for all people. Therefore, it depends how we can control ourself using it for not make it a bad effects that can impact it with our life.
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| 2018-09-04 | jessica rusli | 56 | view |
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 77, Rule ID: ACCORDING_TO_ME[1]
Message: This phrase can sound awkward in English. Consider using 'in my opinion' or 'I think'.
Suggestion: In my opinion; I think
...wever, had a slightly negative impacts. According to me, that nowadays mobile telephones have a...
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Line 3, column 47, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'easier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: easier
...vantages of mobile phone is make people more easier to communicate with many people in othe...
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Line 3, column 345, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ob opportunities for new youngster. Then , in mobile telephone have a GPS technolo...
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Line 7, column 40, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... In conclusion, that mobile phone bring a advantages and also disadvantages for a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, however, if, so, then, therefore, while, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1314.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.70967741935 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50549396327 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.516129032258 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 434.7 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.6612030912 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.125 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4375 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.375 7.06120827912 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236154505505 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100571625469 0.084324248473 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0914243757177 0.0667982634062 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.195713507215 0.151304729494 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.12608216143 0.056905535591 222% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.74 12.4159519038 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.42 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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