Modern cultures around the world have become similar as compared to the past. What are the main reasons for it? Is it a positive or negative development?
Nowadays, according to globalization, a variety of cultures is not as bold as the previous century. The primary reason which causes this revolution could be transportation facilities that are boosting day by day all over the world. This similarity between cultures could have a negative consequence in the history of regions.
The modern transportation system has been the main item in connecting differing areas, which has been enhanced throughout the last decades and made international links pretty more accessible than before this converting. International communications have limited the defined borders, and all the world is going to become a unit zone with a similar culture. For example, Afghans had worn a special uniform not only in their country but also in other foreign communities. Twenty years ago, if you went to Afghanistan, you could not see anybody worn a suit, but today, it has changed, and they wear other clothes too in their country.
Although globalization has brought a tremendous benefit in societies, I believe making cultures forgotten or removing some social values could not be a positive effect on them, because the culture of every region is a social investment of that. Societies are responsible for transmitting it to the next generations, which have the right to know who their ancients were and where is their position in this world. The heritable culture represents the roots, which is a vital non-materialism factor for everybody.
In conclusion, although international communication has had positive points for every country, it has caused several drawbacks, such as damaging the individual cultures and spiritual heritages.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, for example, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1415.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.4214559387 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12491511313 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.632183908046 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 442.8 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.9962049466 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.636363636 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7272727273 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.90909090909 7.06120827912 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.2391789513 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0830614717358 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0521276078201 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130342113293 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0284718760578 0.056905535591 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.45 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.8 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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