More and more people are migrating to cities in search of a better life, but city life can be extremely difficult. Explain some of the difficulties of living in a city. How can governments make urban life better for everyone?
Noisy, the crowded, pollution, traffic jams, crime are common things occurred the city's residents have to face every single day. However, migratory people who want to have a better life, now have to struggle with those problems. Thus, the government should give some solutions to make a better life for them.
The prominent problem is living and working conditions. Most people leave their hometown to the large city to work in a factory may be exposed to radiation or choose the more dangerous job (workers sometimes avoid it) for a high salary. Additionally, the cost of living in a metropolis is much higher than in rural areas. Therefore, to save money, they have to share the space with the others or eventually, live in a slum.
Besides, crimes are also a challenge to the government. With a crowded population, organizations, activities seem to be overcontrolled. Bad guys abuse their innocence or threaten them to go to the guilt path.
To avoid negative influences, the government should have a proper attitude. First of all, raising knowledge is needed. Then, support them to find a relevant job with labor protection, hygiene the environment where they live. Finally, fasten the law to prevent crimes.
In conclusion, living in a city is complex, we must have the right thoughts and obey the government's rules for a better life.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, finally, first, however, if, may, so, then, therefore, thus, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1120.0 1615.20841683 69% => OK
No of words: 224.0 315.596192385 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86867284054 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81224488639 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.651785714286 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 355.5 506.74238477 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.2712662407 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.6666666667 106.682146367 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.9333333333 20.7667163134 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.86666666667 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.259982762971 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0686186413895 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0893379306889 0.0667982634062 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137600300675 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.106746962791 0.056905535591 188% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.13 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, finally, first, however, if, may, so, then, therefore, thus, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1120.0 1615.20841683 69% => OK
No of words: 224.0 315.596192385 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86867284054 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81224488639 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.651785714286 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 355.5 506.74238477 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.2712662407 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.6666666667 106.682146367 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.9333333333 20.7667163134 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.86666666667 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.259982762971 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0686186413895 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0893379306889 0.0667982634062 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137600300675 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.106746962791 0.056905535591 188% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.13 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.