More and more people decide to eat healthy food and exercise regularly. What are the reasons for this trend? What can be done to encourage more people to eat healthier and exercise?
In this day and age, people are more likely to live in a healthy way by eating clean and doing physical activities in their daily basis. From my perspective, caring more about health and saving money are the compelling reasons for this change. Moreover, there are numerous ways to stimulate humans follow healthy life.
To begin with, it is conspicuous that taking care about human health and realizing the cost when paying for cure diseases leads to people learning how to eat healthy meals and do exercises every day. First, with the soaring of diseases such as Covid, H5N1 and cancer which can have a detrimental effect on humans’ health or even be fatal, humans are more and more conscious about their health. Besides, their sedentary lifestyle results in a plenty of problems such as obesity. Therefore, instead of eating fast food or packaging food people tend to make their food which can provide a myriad of nutrients as well as taking regular exercises to strengthen their fitness and get rid of these problems related to their health. Inadditionally, if people infect a severe disease, they will pay a huge amount of money to cure it. However, not all diseases can alleviate and more seriously this can trigger the death of patients. Take the Co-vid 19 pandemic as an apparently example, a number of people suffered from it and some of them passed away. People, therefore, take care of their health a lot recently.
Admittedly, governments and each individual have a responsibility to boost human live in a healthy way. To commence with, authorities can make use of their power to raise citizens’ awareness to eat healthy food and do physical exercises. For example, they can public some TV programs or public campaigns about merits of following a heathy diet and do exercises as well as some drawbacks of harmful food or drink and sedentary lifestyle, which can do a favor for perception of the people. In addition, each person should equip themself by updating news or learning methods to stay healthy.
To sum up, the trend of living healthy is widespread in our lives because humans realize the importance of eating healthy food and take regular exercises so government and individual should take action to boost this positive change.
Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 53, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a healthy way" with adverb for "healthy"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...and age, people are more likely to live in a healthy way by eating clean and doing physical acti...
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Line 3, column 956, Rule ID: A_RB_NN[1]
Message: You used an adverb ('apparently') instead an adjective, or a noun ('example') instead of another adjective.
...atients. Take the Co-vid 19 pandemic as an apparently example, a number of people suffered from it an...
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Line 5, column 87, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a healthy way" with adverb for "healthy"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...ve a responsibility to boost human live in a healthy way. To commence with, authorities can make...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, besides, first, however, if, moreover, so, then, therefore, well, for example, in addition, such as, as well as, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 10.4138276553 202% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1884.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 380.0 315.596192385 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95789473684 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41515443553 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62760225849 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.536842105263 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 589.5 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.3095373902 49.4020404114 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.75 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.75 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.3125 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.31616753205 0.244688304435 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0945691871163 0.084324248473 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.070988478988 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.196322264806 0.151304729494 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0516737100728 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.52 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 53, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a healthy way" with adverb for "healthy"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...and age, people are more likely to live in a healthy way by eating clean and doing physical acti...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 956, Rule ID: A_RB_NN[1]
Message: You used an adverb ('apparently') instead an adjective, or a noun ('example') instead of another adjective.
...atients. Take the Co-vid 19 pandemic as an apparently example, a number of people suffered from it an...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 87, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a healthy way" with adverb for "healthy"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...ve a responsibility to boost human live in a healthy way. To commence with, authorities can make...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, besides, first, however, if, moreover, so, then, therefore, well, for example, in addition, such as, as well as, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 10.4138276553 202% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1884.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 380.0 315.596192385 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95789473684 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41515443553 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62760225849 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.536842105263 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 589.5 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.3095373902 49.4020404114 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.75 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.75 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.3125 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.31616753205 0.244688304435 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0945691871163 0.084324248473 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.070988478988 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.196322264806 0.151304729494 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0516737100728 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.52 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.