Some people think that too much attention and too many resources are given to the protection of wild animals and birds. Do you agree or disagree?
These days, some people point out that the government and citizens in the world should raise their awareness about the importance of the wild animals or birds in order to protect them from many factors. In my opinion, I partly agree with this statement, people are expected to comprehend more about the impact if wild animals are extincted.
Overall, there are numerous reasons why people claim that people are supposed to pay attention and resources to help animals avoid extinct and protect them better. To begin with, the government could make use of their power to raise the awareness of residents about the protection of animals. To take Vietnam as an example, the governments have introduced laws to deter and impose heavy fines on those who damage the animals habitats, they have to pay a huge of money as a heavy fine for deforestation. In addition, annually, there is an abundance of animals is use to experiment in laboratory. In fact, according to some studies, there are many vaccine, which was developed using animals testing and it have saved millions people in the world. Another reasons could be that if use people to experiment, it would be causes fatal disease.
Furthermore, the government also pay attention on some fields, it is a good way to solve the some huge troubles about wild animals. In fact, with the development of the society, there are many manufactories discharge the etoxic gas on a daily basis, which causes polluted and these animals face many problems. Moreover, there are many factories are built to make room for the forest, it leads animals lose their habitats and gradually become extinct.
In conclusion, it is crucial to protect the wild animals and birds and both the governments and individuals togherther take responsibility for it.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, moreover, so, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1493.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01006711409 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69264095288 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.523489932886 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 486.9 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.4349952574 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.416666667 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8333333333 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.255200704663 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0956730335936 0.084324248473 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0571215609987 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164925557997 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0327437598974 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.