More and more people today are using computers and electronic devices to access information Therefore there is no longer any need to print books magazines or newspapers To what extent do you agree or disagree Give reasons for your answer and include any r

Essay topics:

More and more people today are using computers and electronic devices to access information. Therefore there is no longer any need to print books, magazines, or newspapers.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

You should write at least 250 words.

In the past, only limited ways were available to access information such as newspapers, magazines, and so on. In the modern scenarios, with the passage of time and advancement in technology use of electronic gadgets is increasing rapidly in order to access information. Despite this, it is agreed that in the foreseeable future print media will disappear and computers, mobile phones will be used by the masses because the computer provides fast, convenient service as well as accurate information.

Firstly, accessing information online provides us comfort as masses can use it at any place and anytime within a few seconds. For instance, today with the help of search engines like Google, Bing, and so on accessing information has become more convenient than in the past. Individuals just need to enter a keyword in the search box about one particular object and whole the information will be in front of their eyes within seconds like if anybody enters Apple iPhone Google search box then whole the detail of establishing apple company and products will be on their smartphone screen. Thus, this makes it clear that print media is not going to be operational anytime in the near future.

Secondly, on print media getting the latest information is slow rather than electronic devices. For example, a few months ago when a Malaysian airplane was crashed then information about it was available on the same day on the internet as well as television but on print media, it was available after one day. Moreover, on Wikipedia individuals can get information about past centuries and about every celebrity, which is tough to find in print media, and showing information by Wikipedia is accurate and really tough to deny.

In summary, electronic gadget helps the masses to keep updated with the latest invention. Thus, it is a clear use of print media in order to access information is an idea that will not be realized anytime soon. It is predicted that print media will be replaced by these devices.

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Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, moreover, really, second, secondly, so, then, thus, well, for example, for instance, in summary, such as, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1673.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 334.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00898203593 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27500489853 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74284997823 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.520958083832 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 541.8 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 68.0674048105 49.4020404114 138% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.692307692 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.6923076923 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.8461538462 7.06120827912 154% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163087996208 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0628418260448 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0348190723068 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0995225626214 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0173088851485 0.056905535591 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.52 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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