More and more people want to buy famous brands of clothes, cars and other items.
What are the reasons? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?
In today's world, buying things from well-known companies is getting increasingly popular. Many people do this to appear wealthy and to increase their social position. Despite the prevalence of this tendency, I believe it is a negative development that leads to problematic consumerism.
On the one hand, improving social standing along with broadening one's outlook has become the driving force of this movement. In reality, those who wear expensive clothes or drive a beautiful car tend to attract more attention and acknowledgement from others. For example, several people tend to imitate celebrities to be in the public eye. Thus, they wear acclimated brands outfits, luxurious jewelries and other high-end stuff to show their wealth.
Nevertheless, many others, however, believe that this manner is catastrophic since it encourages people to compete in order to stand out from the crowd and garner as much attention as possible. As a result, many people spend money that is superfluous and less essential for themselves, and they live to regret it. Take my friend is an emblematic example, she always purchases clothes for her virtual life. She only puts them on once to take several photos to post on social media such as facebook or instagram; and the consequence is that she is in the red in the remaining days.
In conclusion, purchasing behaviour depends on people's bias, however, I comprehensively believe that it is one of the worst trends in the present day that affects people negatively.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 66, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...g social standing along with broadening ones outlook has become the driving force of...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, nevertheless, so, thus, well, for example, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1261.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 243.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18930041152 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94822203886 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90976477056 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.633744855967 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 388.8 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.0040202552 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.083333333 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.25 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.08333333333 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.139159759123 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0455697941667 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0337423375476 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0767060843376 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.031245455741 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.05 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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