Some people think that hosting an international sports event is good for the country, while some people think it is bad. Discuss both views and state your opinion.
Opinions diverge on whether the globe sports competition organized does more good than harm to the host country . Although this sentiment can be justified to some extent, I take the opposite attitude owing to some rational reasons.
Admittedly, there are myriad upsides brought to the country organizing the event. This explains that the economy of the host country can be developed. When there is any international sports festival taking place, the host country will be ready to receive a large number of visitors from many different countries around the world to attend it. In addition to participating in the congress, they will spend time visiting, learning and will encounter some of the great economic potential of the host country, which leads to making profitable investments. Hence, the host country's economy has also grown strongly. What is even more prominent is to create job opportunities for a short time for workers. When a big event is held, there will be a sharp increase in the number of visitors. As a result, this contributes to the development of the tourism economy and the number of jobs also increases, which requires a lot of human resources to serve the event.
Conversely, I ascertain that the soaring crime rate alongside the cost can do the country a disservice. Perceptibly, it is called social disturbance. To be more specific, International Games always attract large numbers of visitors, this is an opportunity for uneducated citizens to abuse and steal. Therefore, this makes people unsafe or even disrupt the daily routine. Further and even more importantly, organizing events is very expensive. When a sports festival takes place, the host country must ensure that the facilities where the event takes place must be really good to create a good impression in the eyes of the visiting countries and create absolute safety for athletes. Therefore, the cost to build is not cheap. In addition, investing resources and wealth in one event will cause a decrease in the government's budget and there will be insufficient funds to be allocated to other areas such as education, military or social welfare.
By way of conclusion, organising a cosmopolitan event can exert both benefits and downturns to a country; however, I do assure that the disservice exacerbates.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, conversely, hence, however, if, really, so, therefore, in addition, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1923.0 1615.20841683 119% => OK
No of words: 374.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14171122995 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3976220399 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88596419474 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553475935829 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 621.0 506.74238477 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.4056921608 49.4020404114 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.210526316 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6842105263 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.21052631579 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222223915213 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0616448674669 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0404849797202 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131720816158 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0491666046541 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.18 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 78.4519038076 139% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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