More and more people want to buy famous brands such as clothes, cars , shoes and so on. What is it cause? Is it positive or negative development for world?
Nowadays, a majority of humans running after money as they think that if they have lots of wealth than they can get all the things which make their lives convenient and comfortable. Due to these a vast amount of masses have great desire to purchase popular brands like clothing, cars, shoes etcetera as well the reason is that people believes in show off , maintain high status and peer pressure among young adults. However, it is a negative establishment for world because it’s wastage of money and people going into debit situations.
There are multifarious factors of this prospective that why people want to buy famous brands and the main is that a huge group of societies have great faith in show off as well as maintaining high standard so that is the reason they deems that if they purchase branded things than it helps them to show other masses how they become rich and these assist them to rise their higher status among communities. Even though, it is common said that branded things are sign of humans wealthier. In addition to this, it is modern phenomena that it’s mandatory for societies that not only provide VIP treatments to the wealthy persons but also offer them huge respect as well so that is why masses want to buy branded goods. Furthermore, the another concerning areas is peer pressure among adults because youngsters have often influence to see their age mates cloths, style as well as standard so that is why they negligible their economic conditions and tries to purchase those items to compete with others. For example, in India, in Delhi a survey conducted by media reported that three quarter people given priority to buy famous brands to maintain their standard in society.
Nevertheless, it is a negative development for the whole globe because it has uncountable disadvantages and the first is that it is a wastage of money as a majority of humans expand each penny of their income to purchase these branded items after that they have not remained any wealth for their future savings. On the other hand, it is often said that saving is insurances for future but humans neglect this perception. Moreover, sometimes humans spend their savings also on these goods. Due to these, they take a big loans to satisfied their status and they have no idea after this what can they do? Similarly, humans have blind after increasing their standard so few times they lose their mental power which perilous for them. Apart from this, a few people are not able to return the debit so that is why they committee suicide . For instance, in Punjab in a little village Bhambuan a body of one person name Dharmpal Singh found hanging on tree by police after the inquiry police told that it was suicide because Dharmpal unable to return loans which he took for purchasing a Verna car.
In conclusion, although branded things are helpful for humans to rise their status symbols but some extent but if humans utilise vast amount of wealth to buy it continues than it is detrimental for their pockets as well as savings.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, similarly, so, well, apart from, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 20.0 7.30460921844 274% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 72.0 24.0651302605 299% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 60.0 41.998997996 143% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2530.0 1615.20841683 157% => OK
No of words: 524.0 315.596192385 166% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82824427481 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.7844588288 4.20363070211 114% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43997464501 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 249.0 176.041082164 141% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.475190839695 0.561755894193 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 776.7 506.74238477 153% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 32.0 20.2975951904 158% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 92.1930506804 49.4020404114 187% => OK
Chars per sentence: 158.125 106.682146367 148% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.75 20.7667163134 158% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.5625 7.06120827912 164% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16528142336 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0629824560105 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0431536178832 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106638180254 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0263230394628 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.7 13.0946893788 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.46 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.33 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 78.4519038076 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.1190380762 146% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.