Majority of learners are going abroad for the purpose of getting education in foreign colleges and universities.while acknowledging I observe that this phenomenon has ample of advantages over its disadvantages. The cardial positive outcome is make able to pupils to face any kind of tough circumstances .
To commence with, why scholars switch to abroad in order to complete their study. To elaborate it, the major pros of doing study in other nation is providing many opportunities for their bright future in the form of working opportunities related to their field. For instance, in the medical field now demand of doctors are burgeoning in foreign countries. In recent times, now many students are moving abroad for making doctors. Moreover,this trend develop the sense of financial management because they live apart from their families and they have need to fulfill their basic necessities so they manage their finance in effective manner in order to satisfy their requirements. That is why this phenomenon is consider fruitful.
On the disadvantages side, when students are live isolated they feel homesick as a result they are not concentrate their study. Apart from this, they deprive from integral virtue of life such as how to communicate with the elders, how to live with their family members consequently, it has adverse impact on society as well their cognitive betterment.
To put in a nutshell I pen down saying that although it has ample of demerits but selecting foreign nation for obtaining education has plenty of merits which are outweigh it's demerits.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, if, moreover, so, well, while, apart from, for instance, kind of, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1328.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 253.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24901185771 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94414492442 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.612648221344 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 421.2 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.1888108194 49.4020404114 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.727272727 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.54545454545 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0861804981533 0.244688304435 35% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.035269686711 0.084324248473 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0310527252657 0.0667982634062 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0507551607957 0.151304729494 34% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0218256361635 0.056905535591 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.77 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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