owing to globalization,the phenomenon of traveling abroad have assumed epidemic proportion as past in all the continents of the world.However,some people uphold it as a positive trend while other have reservations about the view.According to me, it could be a positive development which undoubtedly impact the society.
There are two major reasons behind this.First and foremost is advertising industries as they are promoting international destinations in an attractive way which really encourage visitors.Hence,majority of people make their plans to visit host countries to enjoy their holidays.Moreover, Air companies are flourishing by leaps and bounds, not providing only fastest as well as cheapest and convenient way of transport to commute from one country to another nation.
To embark on,with regards of positive development,one of the prominent benefit is that visitors may spread the awareness about other countries culture and tradition which really create a way of atmosphere of knowledge and history for other nations. Furthermore,this trend helps to maintain a social relation and bounding with other countries and offer a chance to start a business with them.On the top of it,this tendency also beneficial to generate the revenue from tourist industries which eventually leads an effective impact on the countries economy.A survey conducted by times of India revealed,Australia generate 55 percent of their revenue from tourism organisations.
Nevertheless,despite the aforementioned advantages,it has some drawbacks.Poor countries are affecting by rich nations as they are stabling their businesses in undeveloped nations which leads a detrimental impact on local an national organisations.Apple company is a good illustration for it as majority of people in India prefer to use exported cell phones.In addition, people are adopting other cultures and following activities which are popular in other countries.
After contemplating the subjected matter, I can conclude my vision that the trend of visiting other countries provide a versatile development and relaxing approach for the future growth of the nation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, hence, however, may, moreover, nevertheless, really, so, well, while, in addition, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1834.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 313.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.85942492013 5.12529762239 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.70773896553 2.80592935109 132% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.600638977636 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 579.6 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 52.0 20.2975951904 256% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 105.119640833 49.4020404114 213% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 305.666666667 106.682146367 287% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 52.1666666667 20.7667163134 251% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 19.8333333333 7.06120827912 281% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 29.0 5.01903807615 578% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138418985449 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0708776218356 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.019041329053 0.0667982634062 29% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0761297655851 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0141316009943 0.056905535591 25% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 32.3 13.0946893788 247% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -6.68 50.2224549098 -13% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 7.44779559118 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 27.1 11.3001002004 240% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 17.6 12.4159519038 142% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.82 8.58950901804 138% => OK
difficult_words: 111.0 78.4519038076 141% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 32.0 9.78957915832 327% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 22.8 10.1190380762 225% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 32.0 10.7795591182 297% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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