It is undeniable that schools act as a beacon spreading the light of knowledge to the kids, which will be reflected in all walks of their life's. "Although" , some folks vehemently believe that school ought to impose children to pursue foreign language. This idea does seems plausible. According to me, these arguments need proper scrutinization before forming any opinion.
To embark on, children's are the tender buds of the society and required to be taught precisely not forcibly. On top of it, they could have liberty what need to opt or not. This leads to eliminate pressure from offspring's in order to elect desired subject. Moreover, imposing kids to learn international language may push extra burden on students shoulder resultant to, falling down academic score. To exemplify, study extra language subject may impact the students standard time table tend to less time for other subject. A recent survey conducted by Times of India revealed, 80% student scored less in academic belong to those school who adding language subject forcefully.
Nevertheless, there is also a another side, student should have freedom to opt for language course. It may do someone a good turn for future prospective. In addition, this tendency not only aid to learner interest but also benefit for future outcomes. Furthermore, adolescence does to aware about what is beneficial in upcoming future. So imposing a international language might help to those student interested in to purse further study in foreign.
To conclude, After gauging both the views, I opine that both the aspects are important for better development of student and school ought to offer choice to offspring.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 166, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...lks of their lifes. 'Although' , some folks vehemently believe that scho...
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Line 1, column 296, Rule ID: ACCORDING_TO_ME[1]
Message: This phrase can sound awkward in English. Consider using 'in my opinion' or 'I think'.
Suggestion: In my opinion; I think
...nguage. This idea does seems plausible. According to me, these arguments need proper scrutiniza...
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Line 2, column 634, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... less in academic belong to those school who adding language subject forcefully. ...
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Line 3, column 29, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...orcefully. Nevertheless, there is also a another side, student should have freed...
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Line 3, column 348, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...eficial in upcoming future. So imposing a international language might help to th...
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Line 3, column 387, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this student' or 'those students'?
Suggestion: this student; those students
... a international language might help to those student interested in to purse further study in...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... further study in foreign. To conclude, After gauging both the views, I opine th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, may, moreover, nevertheless, so, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1412.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24907063197 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87414089269 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.676579925651 0.561755894193 120% => OK
syllable_count: 441.0 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.2558184986 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.25 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8125 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 7.06120827912 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165409443152 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.045107279685 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0339683773036 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0837139196827 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.031250813727 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.87 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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