In this materialistic and hedonistic world,the phenomenon of having a own house have assumed epidemic proportion in all the continents of the geographical world.Although, People are more inclined to owing a home instead of renting.Some folks uphold it as positive trend while others have reservations about it.According to me,this statement needs proper scrutinization before forming any decision.
To embark on,with regards of positive developments, one of the prominent benefits,own house offer a sense of freedom and respect.People may easily renovate their homes without any permission of others.They can make the changes according to the latest trend and own preference. Moreover,Stability is an another fact of own house.Individuals can live on the same place for a long time which is quite helpful for their upcoming generation.They do not need to relocate one place to another due to loathsome behavior of landlords.On the top of it.Having a own house also provide the value and respect in front of our peers in their society which leads a superior impacts on themselves.A recent survey conducted by times of India revealed,ratio indicates that 65 percent of people feel happy just because of having own house in the society rather than renting ones. Furthermore,People can save the rent expenses and they can use the same money for other purposes.
Nevertheless,despite the aforementioned advantages,It has some drawbacks.People who always relocated due to different job opportunities may not own a house as this trend would leads a detrimental impact on them.In addition,individuals need to spent hefty some of money on the issues and problems which they face in their houses every year such as, Motor repair, painting and many more.To exemplify-My father spent around 2 lakes every year to renovate our old house.According to me, we can easily rent a updated house with all the necessary amenities in this amount.
After contemplating the subjected matter,I can conclude my vision,Having a own house may provide versatile development and relaxing approach for the next three generation.Hence, It is compulsory to buy a home for everyone to make their life comfortable for the future and family.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, hence, if, may, moreover, nevertheless, so, while, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1872.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 345.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.42608695652 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3097767484 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.57192252713 2.80592935109 127% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.608695652174 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 605.7 506.74238477 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 57.0 20.2975951904 281% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 171.323037953 49.4020404114 347% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 312.0 106.682146367 292% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 57.5 20.7667163134 277% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 15.0 7.06120827912 212% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 38.0 5.01903807615 757% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151357784313 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0795927114863 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.00833283339499 0.0667982634062 12% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0871536695486 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0234868445473 0.056905535591 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 32.9 13.0946893788 251% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -3.3 50.2224549098 -7% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 17.1 7.44779559118 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 27.9 11.3001002004 247% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 15.1 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.27 8.58950901804 131% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 78.4519038076 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 31.5 9.78957915832 322% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 24.8 10.1190380762 245% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 28.0 10.7795591182 260% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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