owing to development in computer technology, technological game have been hailed as on of the fascinating innovation in the game industry.it is undeniable that offspring's inclination towards the computer's game has grow in recent years. Although, some folks vehemently believe that kid's giving plenty of time to computer games than sports. However, some people uphold it as a positive trend while other have reservations about the view. According to me, it could be a negative development which undoubtedly impact the children life.
To embark on, there are numerous reason behind this. First and foremost is, computer is flourishing by leaps and bound , providing kids new avenues while keeping facilitates with various services. To exemplify, learning e-books, games and internet. But children do opt for game most of the time as part of leisure activity while playing game, they avoid everything. This leads to do not focus on study, loosing grip on social activity and some time get arrogant.
On top of it, student in computer class, could waste their all time on game rather than study as a result loosing academic grade. In addition, kids running away from sports , the main cause of this is computer game as they more fascinating than outdoor study. This tendency leads to not only lack in physical fitness but also loosing a moral value. A survey conducted by Time of India revealed , majority of offspring who spend heaps of time on computer screen suffering from severe dieses for instance headache, migraine, eye issue and mental disorder.
Nevertheless, despite the aforementioned drawback, it has some positive outcomes as well. in recent years, some gaming company developed analytical games which associated with brain's skill by playing those game, children could developed reasoning skill may lead to increase problem solving skills. Furthermore, children do learn basic of primary education for instance, multiply, addition, alphabets and so on with coordination of some games who offers this facility.
After contempting the subjected matter, I can conclude my vision. playing games on computer is beneficial for some extent. But it has some adverse effect on children as well. Although, there are a few positive of this approach, the positive of it are far higher.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, may, nevertheless, so, well, while, for instance, in addition, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1923.0 1615.20841683 119% => OK
No of words: 364.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28296703297 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36792674256 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76382940484 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 216.0 176.041082164 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.593406593407 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 607.5 506.74238477 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.141767942 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.15 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.9 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.324374676199 0.244688304435 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0888210277721 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0617280243063 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180476979513 0.151304729494 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.034154543385 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.13 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 78.4519038076 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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