Most adult people are spending their life time at work station so that job satisfaction is a significant point of personal welfare. There are at least two factors of why people feel satisfied on their job; gaining high salary and comfort work station. Thi

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Most adult people are spending their life time at work station so that job satisfaction is a significant point of personal welfare. There are at least two factors of why people feel satisfied on their job; gaining high salary and comfort work station. This feeling is very reasonable to get by the workers.

Most adult people are spending their life time at work station so that job satisfaction is a significant point of personal welfare. There are at least two factors of why people feel satisfied on their job; gaining high salary and comfort work station. This feeling is very reasonable to get by the workers.

One of the best reasons of why people work every day is to gain wages in form of money. It is believed that higher salary collected every month, higher happiness they possess. Thus, the payment is one of the major factors to have satisfaction of working. It is illustrated by the data released by Worker Magazine, 3rd volume 2015 that 90% of workers were looking for best wages. They tent to find a big factory to work in. Furthermore, another reason is the environment of the job station. Some workers like working in a very convenient place. For example, a research conducted by Indonesia University issued that in 2017 most factories are providing their employees with high standard of surroundings to improve workers’ productivity. The result also claimed that good atmosphere can reduce the level of stress while working.

Additionally, the expectation of job satisfaction is very realistic and needed very much by both the employee and employers. There is power correlation between workers’ psychological condition and the achievement they get. More comfortable and enjoyable place for working, more contribution they offer to the company. Kampoeng Raja, Ltd is a good example to illustrate this condition. Most of its workers are happy working here. Irma, one of the workers said “I like working here because due to this company offers me very nice place for working. It provides all my working stuffs”.

To sum up, job satisfaction is influenced significantly by two major factors that are salary and well-being works station. All workers expect this as it is individual element of life.

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Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'lifetime'?
Suggestion: lifetime
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, look, so, thus, well, while, at least, for example, to sum up

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1620.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 315.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14285714286 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91463151111 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.571428571429 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 504.9 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.7984870542 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.1428571429 106.682146367 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0 20.7667163134 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.2380952381 7.06120827912 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 8.67935871743 184% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.431686150622 0.244688304435 176% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.126603698245 0.084324248473 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.206827112556 0.0667982634062 310% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.344999423011 0.151304729494 228% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.315275213822 0.056905535591 554% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.94 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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