Most countries spend much money on education as they start to realise the importance of education. in your opinion which two subjects are the most important for you and people and which one is the least important.
Education level is increasing from last two decades. It is indeed true that the benefits of education has been significantly recognised, increasing number of countries invest in the academic. However, this has also raised question on the chronological importance of the subject taught. In my opinion Mathematics and Science are of prime importance and History is negligible focus. My views are elaborated further.
There are several reason to justify my opinion, the first and the foremost one is, Mathematics is omnipresent subject. This is to say that math and its sub-branches such as Arithmetic, Trigonometry, Calculus and Geometry are applicable in people routine life. For instance, Trigonometry is applied for construction such as building, bridge; while Arithmetic is trade and commerce. The subject also moulds the students to imply a methodical approach and pin-pointed analysis.
Considering Science subject. Science is the other essential subject according to me. The foremost reason is that Science is extremely relevant as it is biotic and the abiotic life we observe around us. By learning Science make young people aware of health, hygine, diseases, cures and treatments. Thus, makes a better society. Furthermore, it is the principal cause in developing reasoning through evidences that may young people may go forward for some new inventions and discoveries.
On the contrary, History is the least important subject for the young. Most students have to memorize dates, names, facts when they study history. In addition this information is not useful in everyday life or on future. Another claim is that as History is a subject that is rarely used in people's lives, so it would be better to focus on Science and Technology and Mathematics which is more relevant to the future and today's demands.
In conclusion, I am of the mind that to some extent History as a subject must be taught at the elementary level of school, but Math and Science are not only academic inputs but also essential part of being an intelligent civilised human beings.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, may, so, thus, while, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 28.0 13.1623246493 213% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1740.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 331.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25679758308 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92433084979 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.580060422961 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 556.2 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 55.8720636812 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.0 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.55 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.35 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 3.4128256513 322% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20182240276 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0548332683833 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0497753584459 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0998847867222 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0612825762971 0.056905535591 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.93 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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