The most important function of music is that it helps people reduce stress. To what extent do you agree or disagree.
It is believed that the key role of music is to ameliorate people of today's psychological disturbances. I somewhat disagree with this view as music is also of primary importance to other aspects of life and the position of the instrument in decreasing stress is not well-grounded.
Music can be attributable to maintain honorable virtues, an entertainment activity, and a form of exhibiting one's values. Historically, Homo Sapiens have taken advantage of music to store and expand their base of knowledge covering customs, folklores and traditions. Due to this, music is a gateway for people exploring history and culture of any particular regions or nations. Another responsibility of music is to provide people with a means of recreational activities. Given the fact that listening to people's favourite melodies gives them a sense of happiness, many individuals play motivational songs to relish. To illustrate, music are harnessed to encourages people while working, exercising or even doing their chores. From the musician perspectives, music is a means of transferring their perception, belief and emotion to the general public. This allows these artists to express their personalites and contribute more masterpieces to the music industry. If music was not created, humans may find it difficult sustaining their traditional heritage, entertaining, and voice music makers' thoughts.
Admittedly, it is common that people are utilizing music for relieving themselves of stress impeding people's efficiency. This stems from the belief that music can alleviate the negative implications from workplaces and private affair. However, there are no compelling evidence to prove such notion.
In sum, while I mostly object to the view that the fundamental benefit of musict is to relieve pressure, I am of the opinion that other merits of music are also significant.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'encourage'.
Suggestion: encourage
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Message: Use simply 'public'.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1589.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.51736111111 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.17182321082 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.607638888889 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 511.2 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.2877280027 49.4020404114 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 105.933333333 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.93333333333 7.06120827912 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223390144853 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0729056150466 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0469617141383 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130456315146 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0399273649407 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.74 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.61 8.58950901804 124% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 78.4519038076 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.