Most major cities around the world continue to grow at a phenomenal rate due to the massive increase in population. This has led to a general decline in the quality of life in city areas as the environment becomes more crowded and polluted.
Give some reasons why this growth has occurred and suggest some practical solutions to this problem.
Nowadays, migrating to cities for better life and future is becoming major trend in the world and these issues are leading to the problem of declining quality of life and environmental problem in urban area. The essay will examine the cause of urban growth and possible measures to solve the problems.
To begin with, one of the major causes of growing urban area is centralized policy of country in developing countries rather than developed countries. people always want to enjoy every modern facility rather than living in rural. Moreover, people tend to migrate in city area for better employment opportunities and to earn and save for future. For instance, the recent research had revealed that, the pollution level of Kathmandu is increasing day by day and it is one of the most polluted city of Asia because of over population. likewise, the living cost of Kathmandu is much higher than other cities in Nepal. Furthermore, higher living standard, better medical facilities , quality education are also major cause of over population in urban area. However, lack of modern technology, poor crops yield, lack of infrastructure also leads the people to migrate to city for betterment of next generation. However, all this causes have a high impact on decreasing quality of life and spoil the nature in urban area.
On the other hand, government and local authority must give emphasis on solving the problems of urban growth. First and foremost, decentralized policy must be applied in country, the people of particular nation can enjoy all facilities evenly. Creating employment opportunities, improving infrastructure in rural area, proving modern technology and subsidies for farming can help to make people stay in the same place where they are born.. In addition, medical and better health care, quality of education for all children and other basic amenities must be evenly distributed to all over the country to reduce the overpopulation and environmental problem in cities area.
In conclusion, colossal population increase in urban area are impacting the quality of lives in cities. So, the concern authority must investigate the major causes and implement the policies to solve these problems.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, likewise, moreover, so, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 6.0 24.0651302605 25% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1866.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 353.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28611898017 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33454660006 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80229975368 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.512747875354 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 608.4 506.74238477 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.8643789659 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.625 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0625 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.875 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194663943292 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0660020939357 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.056915552101 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126254860469 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0482092908476 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.02 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.