Most of our information comes from the Internet nowadays. Some people say that a large part of the information we get is incorrect. Do you agree or disagree.
Internet has become an indispensable part of our lives and now we can not deny the role of Internet. Internet is large source of information and majority of people get news and information via Internet but some people argue that sometimes the information available on the Internet is unauthenthic. Although Internet provide information regarding anything but I also believe that some information available on the Internet is not original.
Admittedly, Internet has large database and it provide information of any kind. Firstly, Internet is integral Part of our lives in today stiff competition we surf on Internet on daily basis for taking many kinds of information. For an instance, it provides reliable information such as in case of education, most of students rely on Internet for their study and get large database to take material for their education which raise their academic performance. Secondly, there are some organizations which upload genuine information on Internet and win the loyality of users. Therefore, only correct information is taken by people. Moreover, in these days people are becoming aware about rumours which sometimes spread by those people who provoke people by providing unauthenthic data. Finally, Internet services provide instant service to people as we can take any information at any time as well as it is cheaper source in order to access information.
On the other hand, everyone have access to Internet because Internet is available on the cell phones therefore, anyone can post information on Internet. Perhaps the information is not original which pose threat to people such as financial loss. For example, the business organizations exaggerates the advertisements pertaining to products and services. Thus, when people buy products they do not get gratification from products. Last but not least, the misinterpretation and misinformation can happen easily owing to those organizations which focus merely on their profits by delivering wrong information.
To conclude, although Internet provide information about everything in these days yet I think that taking information from Internet sometimes give insufficient return because there are some group of people who upload unauthenthic information.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, if, moreover, regarding, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, thus, well, for example, i think, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 26.0 8.3376753507 312% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1906.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 343.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.55685131195 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30351707066 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12120878153 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.498542274052 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 630.9 506.74238477 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.9176165553 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.125 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4375 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.75 7.06120827912 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 5.01903807615 359% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.379822043682 0.244688304435 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.140837077768 0.084324248473 167% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0855257048876 0.0667982634062 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.26083023278 0.151304729494 172% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0837504352934 0.056905535591 147% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 50.2224549098 66% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.97 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.