Most people try to balance between work and other parts of life. Unfortunately, not many achieve this balance. What problems does this cause? Can you suggest some solutions to this issue?
In the hustle and bustle society, people are making efforts to maintain their balance between career and other aspects of life. Sadly, it still can be seen that the stability remains elusive for flocks of individuals. From my perspective, this status quo can exert detrimental effects on our society and human developments, thus pragmatic methods should be taken to mitigate this problem.
To begin with, the imbalance between work and other values of life will give rise to debilitating health conditions and anti-social behaviours. As a result of excessive working time, people can not have the luxurious time to take care of themselves in terms of physical and mental well-being. They allocate the whole time for concentrating on their projects and assignments, thereby showing scant attention to supply themselves with enough nutritions and unwinding time. Therefore, this results in both physical and mental impairment, which inhibits human developments in modern society. Moreover, when individuals have to be confronted with insurmountable difficulties in balancing their life, it’s possible to create obnoxious behaviour and unpleasant feelings. It’s my conviction that undue pressure from pursuing their career can render humans disoriented in their life because of the deficiency of recreation and family support.
In the face of a growing trend of instability between work and lifestyle, there is plenty of room for different down-to-earth measures to minimize this issue. The first and foremost is that every individual should be self-conscious to pay attention to their own health by doing exercises and managing the amount of working commitment and family needs to become their moral support as well, which can improve humans’ disposition and contentment. In addition, municipal authorities encourage outside activities and sport competition among offices and companies that can help to promote workers’ well-being and lead an all-round development society.
In brief, the debilitating health and obnoxious attitudes are attributed to the occupation and social lifestyle imbalance. As a consequence, different practical solutions must be taken as possible to alleviate this phenomenon.
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, moreover, so, still, therefore, thus, well, in addition, in brief, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 10.4138276553 202% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1889.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 330.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.72424242424 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06573976889 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.621212121212 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 579.6 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.856503194 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.928571429 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5714285714 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.78571428571 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20810922126 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0699639083572 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0530249483023 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130276158378 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0561816037217 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.3 13.0946893788 132% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.21 50.2224549098 62% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.19 12.4159519038 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.23 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 114.0 78.4519038076 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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