Most societies has its homeless people. Some people think that the best way to help them is to give them money. To what extent do you agree?

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Most societies has its homeless people. Some people think that the best way to help them is to give them money. To what extent do you agree?

Any given society has a certain amount of the homeless population, and it is thought by some to help them out by giving money to them. I completely agree with this argument as I believe that donating money helps them to afford for accommodation and come out of abject poverty.

Firstly, money is the only way for homeless people to get proper shelter. Being unaffordable to buy a house or to rent one is the main reason for people to live on streets, so some donations, either from what we have or the government has, enable them to save their earnings in a period of time and pay for a home. The billionaire Bill Gates, for instance, donated half his money to Europe’s homeless people, which later reduced the number of people living on roads in Europe significantly.

Secondly, donating money helps them to come out of abject poverty. Most of the homeless people live under extreme debts or without any job since they are stuck in a vicious circle of earning that is far less in proportion to their bare minimum expenses. This is why giving some amount of money may help them to come out of that poverty circle. In the Netherlands, the government pays 50 dollars a month of every homeless individual for one year, during which they can try to earn and save some money. Thus, the money given to the poor people residing in open public spaces may reduce the insult they receive from their intense poverty and start to save money.

In conclusion, homeless people are present in every single society, and some believe in donating money as the best way to help them. I also believe that donated money alone can take care of their expenses and makes them save their earnings to find accommodation and escape poverty.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: period
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, thus, for instance, in conclusion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1424.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.66885245902 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45993425493 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.511475409836 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 459.9 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 47.4191563494 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.666666667 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.4166666667 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.16666666667 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.362668492504 0.244688304435 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.157412232214 0.084324248473 187% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0951210476284 0.0667982634062 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.243102437857 0.151304729494 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0519398806596 0.056905535591 91% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.41 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 78.4519038076 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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