Most Societies has its homeless people. Some people think that the best way to help them is to give them money.
To what extent do you agree?
Homeless individuals exist in many societies, a number of people believe that giving them money is the most effective method to assist them. While I agree that aiding people without homes with money has its advantages, however, it also has its disadvantages.
Firstly, the giving of alms or charity to people who are in need of it is a great way to promoting peaceful coexistence in society, moreover, crime is said to reduce when homeless people are satisfied. To Illustrate, a popular newspaper carried the story of how crime rates have increased due to an increasing number of people without homes and unemployed persons. A homeless person was arrested while trying to rob a store for food, he kept on screaming “I only want to eat”. This particular crime probably ought not to happen if he had been assisted with money to get food. Furthermore, the importance of assisting people in need of money with money cannot be overemphasized.
Contrarily, assisting destitute persons with money can also cause an unnecessary sense of entitlement on the homeless person part, they start seeing it compulsory to always receive help from people, this money is eventually used in purchasing hard drugs, whereas, they can go out and look for jobs to help them with money so they can get their homes back. For example, a vagrant decided to change the course of his life by using the money given to him by strangers to appear clean and apply for minimum wage jobs, he got a job at Mcdonalds' this slowly got his life back together subsequently getting an apartment. On the contrary, a homeless man who used this money to buy hard drugs will continue being without a place to live.
In conclusion, giving alms to people without homes is the most effective way to help them, while this may be true, there are also downsides to this.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, look, may, moreover, so, whereas, while, for example, in conclusion, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1512.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 315.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65533116064 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.571428571429 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 477.9 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 75.5396015674 49.4020404114 153% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.454545455 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.6363636364 20.7667163134 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.0 7.06120827912 170% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.283289169233 0.244688304435 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120891743577 0.084324248473 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0944427827911 0.0667982634062 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.214346835073 0.151304729494 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.10025856389 0.056905535591 176% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 50.2224549098 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, look, may, moreover, so, whereas, while, for example, in conclusion, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1512.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 315.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65533116064 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.571428571429 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 477.9 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 75.5396015674 49.4020404114 153% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.454545455 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.6363636364 20.7667163134 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.0 7.06120827912 170% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.283289169233 0.244688304435 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120891743577 0.084324248473 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0944427827911 0.0667982634062 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.214346835073 0.151304729494 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.10025856389 0.056905535591 176% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 50.2224549098 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.