Most students choose to work part time during their university studies. Do you think it’s good or bad idea? Give your opinion and support with an explanation and examples.
No one can argue that education is a key to have a better life. University students have to dedicate themselves in their studies in order to achieve a degree. Moreover, some students also want to work as a part-time employee during their university life. Some people thing that it could affect their education performances, whereas I think that it is a good idea to work along with study. The positive developments of working part time will be discussed carefully.
To begin with, the first benefit of doing a part-time job in university life is financial stability. Having their own income, it a...
- People are now living longer than ever before and many old people are unable to look after themselves. Some people believe that it is responsibility of families to look after the elderly, while others say governments should provide retirement homes for th 70
- The graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. 70
- In many countries today there are many highly qualified graduates without employment What factors may have caused this situation and what in your opinion can should be done about it 88
- Now that there are no unknown places left on Earth that individuals can explore exploration has taken the form of overcoming physical challenges What is your opinion of this development 70
- The best way for governments to solve the problem of traffic congestion is to provide free public transport in 24 hours per day and seven days a week To what extent do you agree or disagree 73
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 7.0 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 18 15
No. of Words: 356 350
No. of Characters: 1779 1500
No. of Different Words: 180 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.344 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.997 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.762 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 127 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 96 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 71 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 48 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 19.778 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 6.537 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.611 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.34 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.556 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.086 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5