In most successful companies, some people think that communication between employers and workers is the most important factor. Other people say that other factors are more important. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
It is argued that communication between managerial staff and other employees is the most crucial key to an organization's success, while others think that there are more significant elements which contribute to the success of an enterprise. This essay will discuss both points of view and my perspective will be given.
To begin with, there are reasons for people to believe that communication between subordinate workers and their supervisor is essential. Firstly, it can enable all task in a company to be accomplished more efficiently and punctually. For example, with a good news system, a department head can properly assign tasks to his or her employees as well as being informed immediately when they need any support or have any special requests to get their job done. By this way, such a system will create a firm foundation for a business to operate smoothly without unnecessary waste of time and finance caused by misunderstandings between superiors and subordinates.
On the other hand, I am inclined to the opinion that there are other more important factors that build the success of an organisation. One of them is the ability of the leader that allows industries to come up with wise strategies and make intelligent decisions regarding their firm survival. Another aspect that should be considered is innovation and creativity which are almost necessary for companies to have an edge over other competitors and make constant advancement. For instance, Windows Phone has stood outside the war between Android and IOS, the reason consumers to turn their backs on Microsoft's products is they do not like Windows Phone's operating system because they are unattractive, slow to change and the app store is poor.
In conclusion, there are convincing arguments for both of the víews discussed above. However, in my opinion, in comparison with internal communication, factors such as the ability of the leader, innovation and creativity are more vital to an organization reaching success.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 108, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'organizations'' or 'organization's'?
Suggestion: organizations'; organization's
...employees is the most crucial key to an organizations success, while others think that there ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, regarding, so, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as well as, in my opinion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1684.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 321.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.246105919 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02894426377 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.607476635514 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 535.5 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 59.0937931503 49.4020404114 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.333333333 106.682146367 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.75 20.7667163134 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.3333333333 7.06120827912 203% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.254847621046 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0895231521432 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0936721972745 0.0667982634062 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147068222128 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.059285962561 0.056905535591 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.5 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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