n many countries, today people are living in a ‘throwaway society’, where things are used in a short time and then thrown away. What are its causes? What are their problems?
In this contemporary era, people like to use things for a shorter time span and then discard them , ultimately living in a throwaway society. There are variety of factors which enforce such behavior of the folks. In the following paragraphs, I will explain the causative factors and the problems that throwaway society can create.
To embark on, there are number of reasons that initiate persons to utilize things for limited time. The predominant reason is that today majority of individuals are wealthy. They never hesitate to buy the things which have higher quality. Due to this reason , they use their commodities for a shorter period and when they find more affluent things they dicard the previous one. For example- number of mobile phones with different features is launched everyday, hence people spend a lot of money in purchasing the things without thinking about old one. The other reason is that nowadays there are plenty of things such as electronic gadgets, vehicles, clothes which fascinate the masses to utilize them. For instance, many online shopping apps display variety of modern clothes and compel masses to purchase them.
Due to these reasons, there are number of problems that can arise which can be detrimental not only for humans but also for environment. Firstly, the tones of waste products are generated by people everyday. Due to this, the demand for land is increasing that initiate the usage of essential land because of lack ofdumping areas . Moreover, the waste generated from electronic gadgets produce massive amount of toxic substances on burning which is injurious for health of people as well as for ecological system. However, this can be resolved by taking necessary actions both by government and individual to mitigate these problems.
To conclude, more wealth and variation in the market are the factors that are stimulating people to form throwaway society. Though they are responsible to produce many adverse effects on environment and individual’sl health, but certains precautions can be beneficial to combat these issues.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, however, if, moreover, so, then, well, as for, for example, for instance, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1746.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 332.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25903614458 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65975677112 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.566265060241 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 553.5 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.7789251919 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.705882353 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5294117647 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.47058823529 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 5.01903807615 339% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.146896349496 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0481013166766 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0487852980735 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0986213399588 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0644677949816 0.056905535591 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.24 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.