New technologies have changed the way children spend their free time. Do advantages of this outweigh disadvantages?
Technology has increased at alarming rate in the globe. A recent decade are witness of development, in technology sector. Amid this development, there is one phenomenon that has associated with it. According to this phenomenon, advent of new technology has both impact like positive or negative on child's development some people advocate that invention main cause of changed the track for spending leisure time. In this essay, I will try to throw light upon pros of technology as well as it's cons. I will also try to posit my perspective about it.
To commence with, there are multifarious reason to shore those people who are in favor of several advantages of technology. The predominant pros is that it has added extensive sources of entertainment. To justify, people find it easy to operate it and they can spent their leisure time by playing games or watch movies. In recent time, adults has played the online game e.g. pubg or mini militia for relief the stress as it called stress buster activity. The another advantage is social network. To explain, social media has been used by wide range of people either they can make new friends or post stories or photos on that stream which are captured by them. Furthermore, technology like internet has more benefits for breeding of humans. It is a vast source of information. People have obtained lot of knowledge of history technology or sports. This can lead to make undermature students productive and talented.
On the other side of spectrum there are several negative impacts. Nevertheless, it's have more positive aspect. Firstly, over used of phones has led to create health related problems such as obesity and eyesight. Secondly, if people have used the technology entire time then they addicted to it. Thus, people always seat in front of them and they distract from education and other social relation. As a result, they would fail in the school as well as make them selves isolate. Last but not the least, In terms of invention of technology people become explicit rely on this development, this may feasible to some outdoor activities will be vanished in near future. Consequently, people will not be fit and productive if they stuck with the technology.
Aggelomerating, all the points I elaborated, it can be concluded that despite having knowledge about merits and demerits of technology there by, people are always preferred video game and watching movies than outdoor activities. That is why I support that declaration of students spent their major time by using technology rather opt the outdoor activities. Hence, it is more fruitful in my opinion.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 262, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'spend'
Suggestion: spend
...find it easy to operate it and they can spent their leisure time by playing games or ...
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Line 5, column 457, Rule ID: THEM_SELVES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'themselves'?
Suggestion: themselves
...ould fail in the school as well as make them selves isolate. Last but not the least, In ter...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, e.g., first, firstly, furthermore, hence, if, may, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, then, thus, well, such as, as a result, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 24.0651302605 179% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 63.0 41.998997996 150% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2192.0 1615.20841683 136% => OK
No of words: 435.0 315.596192385 138% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03908045977 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56690854021 4.20363070211 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75386563364 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 238.0 176.041082164 135% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.547126436782 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 707.4 506.74238477 140% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.76152304609 231% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 16.0721442886 168% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 50.635738882 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.1851851852 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1111111111 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.55555555556 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200649935954 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0488695257663 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0470202173747 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123377987407 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0329201881326 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 78.4519038076 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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