Nowadays consumer goods are cheaper to buy. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
It is true that the products’ prices are affordable for everyone to purchase. This trend would introduce both pros and cons, but I would argue that the benefits do outweigh the drawbacks.
On the one hand, it is clear that reducing the cost of goods would bring about several disadvantages. Firstly, because the manufacturers want to make products' prices become cheaper, these products might have low quality. This would lose their trust in those products’ manufactures. Secondly, the number of consumption would rise, which leads to the expansion company to meet the increased demand from customers. As a result, the environment would be polluted because of toxic waste and gas emission.
On the other hand, I personally believe that the advantages of this trend would prove to be more important. First, the low products’ prices are suitable for households with limited incomes, which allow customers to buy diverse types of food. If the costs are reduced, the individuals who are from poor backgrounds could not buy them. Secondly, because of lower prices, the people’s purchasing power would be promoted. This leads to the development of the economy.
In conclusion, I believe that the advantages of reducing the price of products outweigh its disadvantage.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... who are from poor backgrounds could not buy them. Secondly, because of lower pri...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, in conclusion, as a result, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1077.0 1615.20841683 67% => OK
No of words: 203.0 315.596192385 64% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30541871921 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77462671648 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8875904407 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 176.041082164 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.605911330049 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 320.4 506.74238477 63% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.4182006034 49.4020404114 49% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 82.8461538462 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6153846154 20.7667163134 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.095600827289 0.244688304435 39% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.032329996537 0.084324248473 38% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0355835693895 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0705106240022 0.151304729494 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.027518544651 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.22 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 78.4519038076 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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