Nowadays many offenders suffering from health problems such as obesity. What are reasons behind it and how it can be solved?
Obesity is the growing concern in majority of the world and which is also raising issue among offenders. There are several reasons for this issue to occur but the first and foremost reason could be the comfortable jail lifestyles and eating habits. To tackle this issue, some remedies should be taken in place.
In this modern era, there are insufficient prison facilities to fill all the criminals as the number of criminals excesses its supplies. Therefore, the incapacity of prisoner’s facilities will lead to impossibility to conduct exercising or outdoor activities which can result in obesity. As a result, criminals are spending more time indoor and they can have comfortable lifestyles which result in obesity.
Furthermore, there will be an increasing maintenance costs to keep many prisoners. To reduce this cost, the prison might provide the easiest and convenient way to provide their meals by serving them fast foods. Therefore, involving with unhealthy foods and reducing exercising time would be the primary causes for obese offenders.
To forbid this, the government could arrange the indoor exercising programs in a jail so that prisoners can maintain their weight. Also, if this is not possible, then doing the voluntary work for the neighbouring areas can be substituted such as cleaning the streets to the clean up the garbage. In addition to this, changing eating habits could contribute remarkably to live far from health issue. All these approaches can lead to healthy lifestyles for offenders while they serve their sentences.
In conclusion, as the society changes, the offenders’ lifestyles have changed to be more luxurious and more comfortable. As a result of this, the obesity is inevitable and this can be solved by various approaches including regular exercising programs and changing eating habits are the one.
Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'furthermore', 'if', 'so', 'then', 'therefore', 'while', 'in addition', 'in conclusion', 'such as', 'as a result']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.237082066869 0.247107183377 96% => OK
Verbs: 0.170212765957 0.155533422707 109% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0851063829787 0.0946595960268 90% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0334346504559 0.0501214627716 67% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0212765957447 0.0437548338989 49% => OK
Prepositions: 0.0911854103343 0.122226691241 75% => OK
Participles: 0.0607902735562 0.0403226058552 151% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.89682490736 2.80594681477 103% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0425531914894 0.0326793684256 130% => OK
Particles: 0.00303951367781 0.00163938923432 185% => OK
Determiners: 0.109422492401 0.0861772015684 127% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0425531914894 0.021408717616 199% => Less modal verbs wanted (like 'must , shall , will , should , would , can , could , may , and might').
WH_determiners: 0.00911854103343 0.011925033212 76% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1857.0 1933.35771543 96% => OK
No of words: 293.0 316.048096192 93% => OK
Chars per words: 6.33788395904 6.12580529183 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20517956788 98% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.399317406143 0.374742101984 107% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.310580204778 0.28420135186 109% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.22866894198 0.203846283523 112% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.170648464164 0.137316102897 124% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89682490736 2.80594681477 103% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.037074148 94% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.563139931741 0.56093040696 100% => OK
Word variations: 58.9819625052 60.7387585426 97% => OK
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0891783567 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.5333333333 20.7743622355 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.0788965097 49.517814964 59% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.8 127.492653851 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5333333333 20.7743622355 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.866666666667 0.814263465372 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38877755511 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 3.99599198397 0% => OK
Readability: 50.5913538111 49.1944974215 103% => OK
Elegance: 1.72972972973 1.69124875643 102% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156431584052 0.332605444948 47% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0940484701369 0.102741220458 92% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0581253380732 0.0668466124924 87% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.573812508695 0.534860350844 107% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.11951324459 0.148594505496 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0715529117054 0.134430193775 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0408926297035 0.0742795772207 55% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.286500483243 0.324371583561 88% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0690863674932 0.0638462369009 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111796347878 0.228012699653 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0353462492655 0.058150111329 61% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.68436873747 58% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.41683366733 88% => OK
Positive topic words: 3.0 5.90881763527 51% => OK
Negative topic words: 6.0 2.5751503006 233% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 1.9629258517 51% => OK
Total topic words: 10.0 10.4468937876 96% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.