Nowadays many people believe that children should be taught history in schools,however, others argue that children should learn subjects that are more helpful for modern everyday life. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Nowadays, there are some debates between educational experts about applicable and helpful courses for children in schools. In developed and modern countries children`s tendency in school is one of the most prominent challenges for majority of parents and teachers.
Some social experts believe that to increase children information about their countries and world events, learning history is unavoidable for them. These experts are unanimous in importance of history as future`s guide. They emphasize that lesson learned from history can prevent aberration of succeed in victorious countries undoubtedly. These experts think that appropriate tutors can persuade children to learn history by utilizing some innovative and motivational methods. Actually, good teachers encourage children to study historical lessons eagerly.
On the other hand, some other experts believe that to increase children information about lifestyle, they should learn new technologies and sciences definitely. In their attitude, in this competitive and complicated world, learning modern sciences is very essential for children to conflict with variety of issues around them. Recent investigations in European countries illustrated that more than 70% of parents were demanded from tutors to teach computer technologies to their children in schools. They think that except computer programs, their children are reluctant to learn other courses totally. Additionally, comprehensive researches in these countries showed that new technologies like computer courses have the most volunteers in university entrance exam there.
In conclusion, because of importance of school years, governments should devise some suitable plan in schools for children. I think we can learn history and use historical experiences for future succeeds. In addition, I should say new technological sciences can improve our lifestyle certainly. Actually, both of them are very essential and useful for our children and us.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, if, so, i think, in addition, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1705.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.00352112676 5.12529762239 117% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01438683162 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.542253521127 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 519.3 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.086230266 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.5625 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.75 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 7.06120827912 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.270078147505 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0961057900046 0.084324248473 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0463896292862 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173976847004 0.151304729494 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0159225982612 0.056905535591 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.3 50.2224549098 74% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.22 12.4159519038 139% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.15 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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