In recent times, a lot of individuals are in front of a dilemma related to their working life, even though most of them choose to start their own business rather than working in a company. There is a plethora of reasons behind this preference, but the disadvantages of such a career choice are related to its risk.
As far as the causes of choosing self-employment are concerned, this phenomenon has been the norm the last decades because of its freedom. Firstly, being an entrepreneur is allied to being in charge of your business’ decision making. In this way, individuals can explore numerous creative solutions to problems that arise and have the satisfaction of seeing their ideas through to completion. Secondly, as well as creative freedom, self-employed are also able to set their own working time management and fit their work around other commitments, which often leads to an improved quality of life. As a result, people choose starting their own business because of the psychological improvement that they expect to achieve in their job, and therefore this has been recently the status quo of the majority of workers. For instance, according to the Office for National Statistics, there are five million self-employed people in the UK, accounting for roughly 15% of the labour market.
In contrast, there are several demerits associated with being self-employed associated with the capital crisis, as well as the lack of being comparative. First and foremost, it is obvious that starting a new business means investing a huge amount of money and savings. Sometimes, individuals find it difficult to raise their investments and carry on with their budget, resulting in a closure. However, the risk of losing the money spent is not the only related to self-employment. There is also the danger of not establishing such a well-known company, and eventually not being comparative to the businesses of the related market. Inevitably, without creating the clientele needed to be recognized as a new firm, the career choice of being self-employed is discouraged.
In conclusion, even if the freedom related to many aspects of working experience is the benefit of self-employment, the possibility of an enormous debt and the difficulties of competition are its costs.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, for instance, in conclusion, in contrast, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1915.0 1615.20841683 119% => OK
No of words: 368.0 315.596192385 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20380434783 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37987740619 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11649480583 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.535326086957 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 593.1 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.8519924619 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.666666667 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5333333333 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.6 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.332441426201 0.244688304435 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106288241024 0.084324248473 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0879321320434 0.0667982634062 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1737688106 0.151304729494 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0874268642004 0.056905535591 154% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.