Nowadays many people choose to be self-employed, rather than to work for a company or organisation.
Why might this be the case?
What could be the disadvantages of being self-employed
We already in industrialization era where myriad peoples often get confuse to choose their job. In addition, many peoples are have more tendency to start their own career rather than applying for a company or organization. In this essay I will discuss why this is happening and detrimental effects that we probably can gain from it.
To start with, your monthly income as a free staff are higher than usual employee. Consequently, an array of people will choose this type of occupation. For example; I have a friend his name is Raymond. After he graduated from university he straightly opened his own shoes store. My friends often make fun of him because they think Raymond is so stupid to start his own career as shoes keeper. Surprisingly, Raymond's monthly income are higher than his friends salaries that work as an employee.
The next, it takes a lot of your money and resources. Therefore, many citizens are afraid to establish their own business. Moreover, if you already succeed establishing your own business there must be a period when your customers are decreasing each day, and in this occasion you must be resilient and be patient about it. For example; I have an uncle that set up his own business. He has been working in this field for almost 4 years and currently his business is having economy crisis. As a result, many of his workers are leaving him alone because they do not get enough payment. My uncle is a resilient and hardworking person therefore, he still believe that he can rebuild his career and that is why he always smile whenever he encounter many issues.
All in all, patience is the key factor to establish your business.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 127, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'had'.
Suggestion: had
...heir job. In addition, many peoples are have more tendency to start their own career...
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Line 3, column 204, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “After” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...e; I have a friend his name is Raymond. After he graduated from university he straigh...
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Line 5, column 276, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ecreasing each day, and in this occasion you must be resilient and be patient abo...
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Line 5, column 652, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[3]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'believes'.
Suggestion: believes
... hardworking person therefore, he still believe that he can rebuild his career and that...
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Line 5, column 717, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[3]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'smiles'.
Suggestion: smiles
...ld his career and that is why he always smile whenever he encounter many issues. A...
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Line 5, column 735, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'encounters'.
Suggestion: encounters
...that is why he always smile whenever he encounter many issues. All in all, patience is...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, if, moreover, so, still, therefore, for example, in addition, as a result, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 24.0651302605 204% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1376.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79442508711 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6670237755 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.567944250871 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 429.3 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.5284488678 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.9411764706 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8823529412 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166446123838 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0475385681779 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0510919199009 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.085632564917 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0613810001829 0.056905535591 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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