Nowadays many people choose to be self-employed, rather than work for a company or organization. Why might this be the case? What could be the disadvantages of being self-employed?
Currently, there is an increasing tendency in number of people opting to be self-employed for different reasons. Many circumstances lead to engaging this phenomenon, whereas entrepreneurship has some drawbacks obviously too.
First and foremost, due to the modern high-competitive job markets multitude of good qualified employees become unable to be recruited on workplaces with decent conditions. They have to choose between low salaries or inconvenient locations of vacant places what does not actually sounds attractive at all. So, the opportunity to embark on something private and profitable opens much more prospective horizons. Besides, you will be confident that all your efforts and hard work are not underestimated by employer, instead, they will be converted into money output that will go straightly into your pocket. Furthermore, self-employment perfectly matches the people who get tired with boring daily routine of ordinate employee and have some personal savings for further investments and vibrant ideas for challenging decisions.
From the other hand, beginning personal business activity is extremely risky and tremendous decision, because of the high level of economical and social responsibility. For instant, it is rather obvious, that the young undergraduate has less chances to start up successfully due to the lack of abundant working experience and special proficiency. Moreover, self-employment means the readability for overloaded work hours to cope with intensive workload and ability to solve problems only by your own efforts and with personal accumulations. In addition, each entrepreneur is immensely vulnerable by the risk of becoming a bankrupt over one night or without any economic resources when he will retire.
To conclude, despite the self-employment has some risks and drawbacks, it is rather worth to strive to do your best and live better life than you could have during your current job position.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 281, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[3]
Message: The verb 'does' requires base form of the verb: 'sound'
Suggestion: sound
...of vacant places what does not actually sounds attractive at all. So, the opportunity ...
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Line 3, column 238, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun chances is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...vious, that the young undergraduate has less chances to start up successfully due to...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, besides, first, furthermore, if, moreover, so, whereas, as for, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1654.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.64505119454 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.24573917162 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.699658703072 0.561755894193 125% => OK
syllable_count: 511.2 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.2149255602 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.833333333 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4166666667 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.08333333333 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.281222002787 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0831102260375 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0787343125836 0.0667982634062 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163192476211 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0650432009692 0.056905535591 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.4 13.0946893788 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.79 12.4159519038 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.32 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.